Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Once a pond time there was a boy. His name was Daniel Simpson. He was born in south, Virginia. Daniel Simpson was born whit his family he was the one in the middle he had two brothers and two sisters. Daniel was 9 years old when started to know that him and his family were slave. Daniel Simpson started working on the fields growing crops and other things that his master wanted him to do. One day Daniel went to water the crops but he maid a small mistake and wheat the master dotter and his master saw but Daniel din not do on purpose and so the dotter of the master was ok wit it but not the master and so he whip Daniel.Daniel dad was so mad he wanted to scream at the master but he couldnot because he was just a slave and had no power over him.one nigth daniel was out side by himself and he was thninking about the masters dother who was so prettry and sweet. then a group of people were coming rigth at tham and so the master came out and he said u are free us are not my slaves no more ur save.

3 comments:

Jasmin Urbina said...

Hello! :) your slave narrative is good you just need pictures and links lol...that is just mean whipping the boy just because he wet his daughter. but thats how people were back then. Its good that that ended. Well laterz

Edgardo said...

hey soto good story but it needs a better ending and pics. It doesn't make much sense. And don't to put a title

Ale said...

hey soto its alejandra i read your story i think its nice but you should add more information and about the boy who got whipped for no reason thats true back in time they used to do that alot